Enamored with your use of line and space between stanzas. Reading it with these as pauses feels so good, so intentional, lovely to recite out loud!

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Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting
Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting

Written by Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting

Ian Cook is the Founder of Alva Dean Consulting & the Lawrence Psychedelic Society, and author of VISHUDDHA - As I think, so I feel, then I act

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