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Such a deep image, palpable moment, I can feel myself there. I love your phrasing and word choice, feels very naturalistic but also transcendental.

That last stanza too, praying to be infused with the essence of the seasons. Gorgeous work!

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Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting
Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting

Written by Ian Cook / Alva Dean Consulting

Ian Cook is the Founder of Alva Dean Consulting & the Lawrence Psychedelic Society, and author of VISHUDDHA - As I think, so I feel, then I act

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